Ideas

Here are my ideas for my film synopsis and my idea for the opening:

Film plot
-Equilibrium: Girl leads unhappy relationship with boyfriend, wants more out of life, rather than waitressing and paying for her studies.
-Disruption: She meets a wealthy man (Leon) who leaves her a letter confessing his love for her.
-Recognition of disruption: She falls in love with this suitor and can no  longer supress her feeling for him and kisses him, her suitor promising to return the following day to elope. Her boyfriend (Victor) sees this and follows Anna when she is alone and kidnaps her.
-Attempt to repair disruption: Leon finds out that Anna has been kidnapped and sets of to rescue her. He finds Anna in Victor's apartment and then unties her. In an epic bloodbath, Leon is slit down his face, but whilst Victor is distracted, Leon takes the knife and plunges it in to  Victor's heart. Victor drops to the floor.
-Reinstatement of Equilibrium: All seems well as Leon sits on the floor and Anna runs over to kiss him. Suddenly, Leon gasps and a rush of blood pours down on Anna. A knife is seen coming out of his chest as Victor managed to stab him before taking his last breath. She kisses Leon numerous times until she realises he's dead. Anna cradles Leon rocking and weeps.

Film opening idea
-Hands seen chopping meat, a girl is seen walking by. He puts the knife down and picks up a rose and follows her. She enters her rented house, which she shares with her best friend Emily and confesses her unhappiness of her relationship with her boyfriend and considers breaking up with him. She receives a text from her boyfriend asking where she is. She replies that she is working and then receives a text saying "how could you?". The cover man outside watching then stomps of and throws the rose in front of her doorstep.
-In doors high key lighting, outdoor low key.
-Non diegetic music either playing through conversation or during outside scenes